Tuesday, January 7, 2014
The worst thing about "Swagger"
The worst thing about "Swagger" is how each chapter is so short. I don't like it because it is always so interesting and then it just leaves you hanging. Like at one point he is talking about how he could get into this college and when he gets the phone call from it the author ends the chapter. I honestly believe that it would have been better if he just had the whole part of the story in one chapter. I think that it gets very confusing if you seperate them. For example one thime the author was talking about the coach and then he ends it and starts talking about him after another 2 chapters, this left me confused because I didn't understand what the coach was saying. Another example of how he brakes up the story is that one time the author is talking about the coach, then he starts talking about a game on the next chapter, then he starts talikng about how his dad could lose his job and then he starts talking about the coach again. This left me totally confused when it came back to the story of the coach. To me this was the only down side as I absoloutly love this book and would highly suggest it to anyone looking for a great sports book.
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I can see what you mean about not liking how a story ends on one chapter and then continues later in the story, but I disagree. Right now, I am reading The House of Hades, which has that same tendency, but I like it because it adds to the story's suspense and it encourages you to read more.
ReplyDeleteYou described the way the book is confusing really good, I hate when books are confusing because you don't know when the point of view changed or something.
ReplyDeleteThe way you described "what is the worst thing about "Swagger" is really great. NIce work!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Rishi, I liked that u used your opinion.
ReplyDeleteYou described that really well, and gave good examples. Nice post.
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